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Tuesday 27 March 2018

flame thrower writing

in writing we haqve been learning about  using wow words. We watched a slow motion video about a flame thrower. Then we brainstormed wow words and similes to describe the flame.


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  1. Anonymous1 May 2018 at 16:40

    Hi Rocki,
    I like your imagination used in this post, it seems like you put some hard work into it.

    In our class, we usually do similar activities, like watching a video, and then writing what we thought the video looked like.

    Next time, make sure to check over your blog post and make sure there isn't any spelling or punctuation mistakes.

    Thanks,
    Ariana (Your Cousin), Yaldhurst Model School.

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  2. Anonymous10 May 2018 at 14:23

    thanks ariana

    for commenting on my blog

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